罗志海 发表于 2021-3-9 17:50:05

谢谢善忘斋

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谢谢善忘斋




风流浪漫秦楼月
大度宽容善忘斋
君问东风故里花开否
妾思锦字云中雁寄来

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第94**短句对联体诗 2021年3月9日

注:谢谢并回复善忘斋诗友赐教。



Thank Shanwangzhai

Qinlouyue Moon was romantic and amorousShanwangzhai Study is tolerant and magnanimous
Her husband asked when the easterly blew in the hometown
and the flowers bloomed or not
His wife thought of the wild goose sent the brocade words from the clouds

Note: Thank and reply my poetry friend, Shanwangzhai’s advice

Metric New Poetry by Luo Zhihai, 3/9/2021
The 94th Two Pairs of Long and Short Sentences of Couplets

ccxm 发表于 2021-3-9 17:50:06

不错！
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