娜情雄姿
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2020-2-12 06:32 编辑桃蕊含情，眼角含羞春心萌动柳绦摇梦，池边摇泪甘雨悠陪巍峨峰岳，精神抖擞姿若利剑
汹涌波涛，气势磅礴声如惊雷
注：第一四句罗志海作，第二三句郝振清作。
Graceful Emotions And Great Postures
The peach pistils with emotionthe corners of the eyes are full of shamethe spring heart is sprouting
The willow branches shakes dreamsby the pool, shakes tearsthe sweet rain leisurely accompanies
Towering peaks and mountainsbeing in high spiritsthe postures as a sharp swordSurging wavesat great momentumthe sound is as loud as a scared thunder
Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.Second and third sentences by Hao Zhenqing.
2/10/2020格律体新诗 ● 十二绝 罗志海译Metric New Poetry ● Twelve Words of QuatrainTranslation by Luo Zhihai第9443首对联体诗
The9,443th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则（草稿）》http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html写作，每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（绝句），是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。 https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-mountain-of-swords-and-a-sea-of-flames/#content
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