罗志海 发表于 2020-3-9 06:44:25

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滿樹梅開迎嘉慶,散發異香山歡水笑人財旺
半空雪舞賜吉祥,清除污垢氣爽神怡福壽長
盈盈媚眼顰懾魂,癡男殷獻摯愛情蟾宮渺渺
嫋嫋簫聲韻牽魄,赤子醉斟思鄉酒碧海茫茫

注:第一三句錢永德作,第二四句羅志海作。


Moving Emotions

The whole plum trees are blooming to welcome celebration
send out strange fragrance
mountains and water are joyful
wealth and prosperity

Snow dancing in the sky to give auspiciousness
after decontamination
airs are fresh and spirits are joyful
longevity

In the graceful eyes
her frown frightens the soul
a man blinded by love dedicates his sincere love
the Toad Palace is vast

The curling sounds of flute
rhymes affect souls
a red son drunken to pour out the homesick wine
the emerald sea is vast

Note: first and third sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

3/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十八絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eighteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9610首對聯體詩
The 9,610th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格t體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-windy-butterfly-token/#content


Ajan 发表于 2020-3-9 06:44:26

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