罗志海 发表于 2020-3-9 20:03:03

永恆的愛

後羿挽弓瞄紅日,急急匆匆臨絕頂,救民於水火
嫦娥揮袖灑雪花,飄飄蕩蕩滿天空,降福助農桑
悠悠雲影念思情,期君永世不憂傷,堅韌而豪邁
縷縷月光溫暖夢,願你今生常快樂,赤誠又善良

注:第一三句錢永德作,第二四句羅志海作。


Eternal Love

Hou Yi aimed at the red sun with his bow
he was in a hurry to reach the top of the mountain
saved the people from fire and water
Chang'e spread snow with her sleeves
it floating all over the sky
down blessing to help the farming and sericulture

Long shadows of clouds with yearning for love
hope you will never be sad
tenacity and heroic
Wisps of the moonlight warms dreams
wish you a happy life
sincere and kind


Note: first and third sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

3/9/2020格律體新詩 ● 十九絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Nineteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9615首對聯體詩
The 9,615th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-bizarre-horse/#content


csgwcsgw 发表于 2020-3-9 20:03:04

不错!
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