罗志海 发表于 2020-3-20 06:00:28

人世間

神態悠閒,秋眸流盼,少女輕靈之氣洋洋溢溢
匠心獨具,慧眼審觀,才郎灑脫夫姿大大方方
鶴翔千嶺,嶺峻難移,霧彌翠柏丹楓奇麗爛漫
海納百川,川流不息,雲罩青山綠水壯觀輝煌


注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句錢永德作。


The Human World

Look perfectly relaxed
the autumn eyes are looking forward to
and it’s overflowing
the girl's spirit is full of lightness

Have great originality
eye-catching judgment
and it’s very natural and poised
the gifted scholar’s free and easy posture

Cranes flying over a thousand mountains
the mountains are precipitous and hard to move
the fog suffusing green cypresses and red maples
which are beautiful and brilliant

The sea contains all rivers
the rivers flowing ceaselessly
the clouds covering the green mountains and the blue waters
which are spectacular and brilliant


Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/19/2020格律體新詩 ● 十八絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eighteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9699首對聯體詩
The 9,699th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-disc/#content


hffirstboy 发表于 2020-3-20 06:00:29

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