罗志海 发表于 2020-3-25 20:09:40

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霧霾罩半空阻出行,干擾交通秩序,一路悶人心緒
鑼鼓喧全場觀歌舞,助催表演氛圍,俄傾扣眾魄旌
意戀晚霞獨身潛海,新波掩映龍樓,小生神情爽朗
胸懷明月雙手摘雲,往事翱翔宇宙,君子氣度恢宏

注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句錢永德作。


Between Heaven And Earth

The haze covers in the sky to block travel
disturbs the traffic order
and makes people feel bored all the way
Gongs and drums are loud
the whole audience watch singing and dancing performance
which helps to promote the performance atmosphere
attract people's spirits at a moment

A young male performer loves sunset glow and dives into the sea alone
the new waves cover the Dragon Tower
he looks bright
With the moon in his heart and the clouds in his hands
the past soars in the Universe
and the demeanor of a gentleman is magnificent

Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/23/2020格律體新詩 ● 二十絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9736首對聯體詩
The 9,736th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/singing-from-their-hearts/#content

QzTZEcoH 发表于 2020-3-25 20:09:41

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