温情
温情心坎凭添愁几缕
枝头悄挂月一轮
黄莺壮胆穿花柳
紫燕含情剪水云
格律体新诗●七绝罗志海著译
第11004首对联体诗2020年11月20日
Warmth
My heart is filled with a few sorrows groundlessly
A moon hangs on the branches quietly
A yellow warblers flies through the flowers and willows bravely
A purple swallow cuts the water cloud affectionately
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,004th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/20/2020
不错！ 诗友您好，此诗四句前四字结构一致，最好有变化。
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