仙界凡间


一进深山闻鸟语
两樽老酒醉春风
天宫宴客吃烧烤
龙殿邀虾比跃腾

格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
第一一五一九首对联体诗二零二一年三月二十八日


The Immortal World And The Mortal World

When I went into the deep mountain, I heard the birdsongs
After drinking two bottles of the old wine, I got drunk in the spring breeze
In the heavenly palace, guests were banqueted to eat barbecue
In the dragon palace, shrimps were invited competition of jumping

(by Luo Zhihai)

不错！