鄉愁糾結夢魂縈繞我心坎
羈客仿偟情竇聚凝君筆端
膽識恒深足智成親興大業
才思敏捷詩泉湧力挽狂瀾

注：第一四句羅志海作，第二三句錢永德作。


I And You

My nostalgia is entangled
and my dream soul haunts in my heart
Visitor's hesitation
and emotion are congealed in your pen tip

I have an agile imagination
my poetry spring is spewing
I do my utmost to stem a raging tide
Your courage is always deep
your knowledge is full
you personally start a huge undertaking

Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/13/2020格律體新詩 ● 十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9661首對聯體詩
The 9,661th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則（草稿）》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作，每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（絕句），是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-jeweled-palace/#content

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