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罗志海
发表于: 2020-4-20 10:54:41 | 显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-4-22 07:48 编辑

我和她  

丹青每伴惠风柔,苍峰立野诗家咏,谷底松涛抒逸韵
黛墨犹随丝雨淡,碧水飞花画客描,江边柳线吐幽思
美丽夜空星闪烁,众里寻她千万次,她还藏我心深处
婀娜云海月沉浮,山中访我二三回,我却有她梦浅时

注:诗写好了,我却有点想哭的感觉。浓烈!


She And I

The black ink is still weak with the silk rain
the emerald water and the flying flowers are painted by the painter
and the willow threads beside the river spit the secluded thoughts
Every time the painting is accompanied by a gentle breeze
a poet chants the grey peak standing in the field
and the pine waves of the bottom of the valley overflow the elegant rhymes

In the graceful cloudy sea, moon ups and downs
two or three times she visited me in the mountains
but I have her in my shallow dreams
In the beautiful night sky, stars twinkle
she has been sought in the crowd for thousands of times
in my heart she still hides

Note: after the poem is written, I feel like crying. Strong!

4/19/2020格律体新诗 ● 二十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty-one Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9921首对联体诗
The 9,921th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-continuous-story/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html

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