不一样的情怀  

山碧碧，水悠悠，窥燕鹊，啾声悦耳，撩人墨趣
舞翩翩，歌袅袅，望烟波，美景销魂，醉我心怀
夏楼台，临野外，梦回头，彩笔轻描，花雨瘦影
秋月夜，伴孤灯，肠断处，银瓶乍破，滚珠香腮

注：第一三句钱永德作，第二四句罗志海作。


Different Feelings

The mountain is green
and the water is leisure
they peeped the swallows and the magpies
chirping is melodious
flirted people’s ink interest

Dancing was light
and singing was curling
I look at the smoke waves
the beautiful scenery was enchanting
my mind was intoxicated

In the summer tower
on the wildness
her dream was back
light painted with colored pen
shadows of the flower rain was thin

At the autumn moon night
she accompanied with solitary lamp
on the place where her intestine broken
a silver bottle was first broken
balls rolled on her fragrant cheeks


Note: first and third sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

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