日夜修煉

晨後吟哦戲文，心中長鑒賞
日間採擷詩句，夢裡細推敲
吳剛晝夜折桂，勁道越千載
才俊蟾宮奪魁，功夫非一朝

注：第一四句錢永德作，第二三句羅志海作。


Day And Night Cultivation

Pick up poems and sentences in the daytime
deliberate them in the dream
Recite drama in the morning
and appreciate it in the heart for a long time

Wu Gang cuts down a laurel tree night and day
and his physical strength strong to overstep millennium
The talented person wins championship in the Toad Palace
and his kungfu is not achieved in one day


Note: first and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and third sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/15/2020格律體新詩 ● 十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10092首對聯體詩 The 10,092th Two Pairs of Couplets
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