仙山洛水

夜听风，晨踏露，雾锁江天，兰舟一叶怎渡
闲把盏，醉横琴，霞飘柳岸，赤子满怀自吟
西地锦，陇头泉，凤凰奋翅，喜晤仙山眷侣
少年游，元会曲，黄鹤入眸，巧逢洛水女神

格律体新诗 ● 十六绝罗志海著译
第10955首对联体诗 2020年11月8日


The Fairy Mountain And Luoshui Water

In the evening, listening to the wind
in the morning, stepping dew
fog locking river and sky
how can a leaf of orchid boat cross the river?

Leisurely to hold a wine cup
drunk to play lute
clouds floating on the willow shore
a newborn baby reciting with emotion

Western Land Brocades
Longtouquan Spring
the phoenixes flapping wings
happy to meet a couple in the fairy mountain

Youth Touring
Yuanhuiqu Music
the yellow cranes into the eyes
happened to meet the goddess of Luoshui Water

Metric New Poetry ● Sixteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 10,955th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/8/2020
http://www.swsm.net/thread-574568-1-1.html

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