暮色

才把夕阳拖下水
又将莲叶染成红
时来翠岭升明月
遁去烽烟见彩虹

格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
第10994首对联体诗 2020年11月17日


The Dusk Scenery

Just the sunset was dragged down into the water
The lotus leaves were dyed red also
It’s time, from the green ridge, the moon rose
The beacon smoke escaped and appeared the rainbow

Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 10,994th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/17/2020
http://www.swsm.net/thread-574568-1-1.html

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