罗志海 发表于 2020-2-9 16:08:14

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辦法周全，襟懷大度王人志身姿曼妙，體態輕靈少女情幽園靜謐，欣鳥兒枝眠共月香茗溫馨，陪君子夜讀挑燈
注：第一三句郝振清作，第二四句羅志海作。

The Warm Moments
Graceful posturea teengirl with her light bodyComprehensive methodsKing’s ambition with his magnanimous mind
Quiet garden is silentI enjoy birds sleep on the branches with moonFragrant tea is warmI companya gentleman reading in the lamp at night

Note:first and third sentences by Hao Zhenqing.Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
2/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of QuatrainTranslation by Luo Zhihai
第9428首對聯體詩The 9,428th Two Pairs ofCouplets後記:對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則（草稿）》http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作，每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（絕句），是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/years-whirling-a-haggard-face/

bTHzJAvw 发表于 2020-2-9 16:08:15

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