罗志海 发表于 2020-3-23 05:55:13

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四海闻名座右铭,心旷神怡,脑海谨牢记,改天派用场
三江显贵舟中客,礼轻义重,胸江当挽留,随尔更着装
寻春云径笑眉展,追莺观燕,雨霏柳色新,惬意登峰顶
问路鹤山诗意闲,踏雪赏梅,风晃松枝翠,朦胧入梦乡

注:第一四句罗志海作,第二三句钱永德作。


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Famous motto of the Four Seas
free of mind and happy of heart
keep it in my brain sea
someday will come in handy

You are a guest in the boat, and the dignitary of the Three Rivers
your gifts are light but important
I will retain you in my chest river
you can dress up casually

Looking for the spring on the Cloud Path
my eyebrows spread comfortably
I chase the orioles and watch the swallows
the rain falls thick and fast and the willow color is new
I climb up the top of the mountain agreeably

Asking for the road in the Crane Mountain
the poetry mood is leisurely
I enjoy the plums in the snow
the wind shakes the green branches of pines
I enter the dreamland dimly


Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/22/2020格律体新诗 ● 二十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty-one Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9723首对联体诗
The 9,723th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang0f118713-2e73-4971-bb68-70659d9c3f8c.html写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-poor-worthy/#content


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