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罗志海
发表于: 2020-4-8 18:23:36 | 显示全部楼层

我將登月騰聖境,妙曲常聽品玉液
君欲絕塵棄人間,伊魂永伴遊黃泉
落筆生輝夢婀娜,互幫互助真朋友
稱心如意天作合,相愛相親是美緣

注:第一四句錢永德作,第二三句羅志海作。


Relationship

I will go to the moon to jump on the Holy Land
and will often listen to the wonderful music and drink the jade wine
You want to get rid of the dust and abandon the world
his soul will travel netherworld with you forever

Writing makes a dream graceful
we are true friends
help each other
It's a perfect match
it's a beautiful relationship
love each other


Note: first and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and third sentences by Luo Zhihai.

4/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十四絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9858首對聯體詩
The 9,858th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-guest-from-afar/#content


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