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罗志海
发表于: 2020-4-16 06:40:36 | 显示全部楼层

秋天酒会

晚霞灿烂,稻香馥郁,却无麻雀子闹林,暮野风光悦目
温度低迷,河水清寒,仍有小鱼儿逐浪,秋郊景色怡神
素月如银,烟柳满堤,欣迎友至携友至,诗人北苑酒会
丹枫似火,霜天万里,不是春归胜春归,墨客东篱菊吟

注:第一四句钱永德作,第二三句罗志海作。


A Wine Party In Autumn

The sunset is brilliant
the rice fragrance is strong
but there is no sparrow noising in the forest
and the scenery in the evening field is beautiful

The temperature is low
the river is cold
there are still small fish chasing the waves

The moon is like silver
the willows are full of smoke on the bank
welcome friends to bring friends come to joyfully
the poets attend a wine party in the North Garden

The maples are like fire
the frosty sky is in thousands of miles
it's not the returning of the spring but better than it
at the East Fence, the literary men chant chrysanthemums

Note: first and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and third sentences by Luo Zhihai.

4/15/2020格律体新诗 ● 二十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty-one Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9888首对联体诗
The 9,888th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/crown-of-the-five-lakes/


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