游黄鹤楼

相邀芳草地，饱蘸汉阳虹。

画壁千年去，名楼四岸通。

纵然琴缥缈，莫道鹤无风。

李白曾搁笔，吾偏弄斧中。

（燕淑清诗，任诚刚译）

Visiting the Yellow Crane Tower

We get together inthe great land a meadow,

In Hanyang weare bathed in the nice rainbow.

View themillennial painting wall of Yellow Crane Tower,

The historiccite connects the four ports here and there.

Even the musicis a thousand years passing away,

There are noyellow cranes flying surely I can't say.

Li Bai didn’tinscribe on tower after seeing Cui Hao’s master piece,

Before asuperior man I even prefer to show off my incompetence.

不错！

tanbinbom 发表于 2020-4-21 09:07
不错！

谢谢老师点评，问候握手。

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邱兆快 发表于 2020-4-25 15:28
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谢谢老师点评，问候握手