燕淑清 发表于 2019-11-16 09:57:07

那刻乡愁

那刻乡愁 作者:燕淑清 英譯:林琳(香港詩人) 童年,是一根长长红头绳 这头,缠在我头顶 那头,牵在娘亲手里头 顺着慢日子爬上老屋青枣树上 少女,是一张改过日期的绿车票 我,颤惊惊坐在里头 等在外头,是娘亲的泪 追着铁轨眼前闪出是土炕 为母,是一封没有寄出的八分邮票 我,放在老妈的墓里 这是,最后一封家书 封闭在一个药瓶里 老了,是一首《我曾在万人坑当过解说员》 我,总想为他们做点什么 将来,面对我曾经摸过的累累白骨头 无愧老妈妈戴过的军帽 (英译2) Nostalgia at that MomentWritten byYan ShuqingTranslatedby Lin Lin(Hong Hongpoetess)When I waslittle , time was a long red-headed string,One end,wrapped around my head,The otherend, in my mother's hand,Climbed upthe old house jujube tree along the slow day. When I wasyoung , time was a green train ticket with a date changed,I, sittingin tremor,Outside,mother wasfull of tears.When I waschasing the rails, the Kangflashed out in front of me. When Ibecame a mother , time was an eight-cent stamp that hasn't been sent out,I put it inmy mother's grave,This was thelast home letterClosed in amedicine bottle. When I amold, time will be a song 《I used to bea commentator in a mass grave》,I alwayswant to do something for them.In thefuture, facing the skeletons I have touched,Worthy of mymother’s military cap.


agNDoNcn 发表于 2019-11-16 09:57:08

不错!

燕淑清 发表于 2019-11-19 11:08:20

谢谢老师点赞,问候握手,多多指导。

邱兆快 发表于 2019-11-19 13:13:54

我似乎读懂了那片乡愁,娓娓道来,深情满满

燕淑清 发表于 2019-11-21 10:43:02

那是高山流水,谢谢问候握手。

燕淑清 发表于 2019-12-20 11:35:21

邱兆快 发表于 2019-11-19 13:13
我似乎读懂了那片乡愁,娓娓道来,深情满满

谢谢老师赏评,问候握手

燕淑清 发表于 2020-5-15 07:23:31

永远的乡愁,永远难望

燕金城(河北省 发表于 2020-5-16 16:58:09

欣赏学习大姐佳作!

燕淑清 发表于 2020-5-17 16:19:21

燕金城(河北省 发表于 2020-5-16 16:58
欣赏学习大姐佳作!

谢谢金城,问候握手。

燕淑清 发表于 2020-5-17 16:20:13

燕淑清 发表于 2020-5-17 16:19
谢谢金城,问候握手。

谢谢金城,问候握手。
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